This is the blog post for week seven and this week I found a founded poem within my first draft of my narrative project. This poem is some inside of my feelings of my convocation with my mother when I had to tell her about what happened that school that day. I used a free form excerpting and remixing style most in my poem because it helped me to add and take away small details that I did not need to make my poem the way it is. I also found it the easiest to use. Thank you for reading.
The Feelings With In She looks with a death stare I began reading her anger I thought about the trouble I was in Why would I throw a snowball at the principle Her anger is like chaos now I do not even know what to say This fight is now serious My mind starts to go into a cold and slushy feeling You do not get into trouble I told myself I start to be more and more nervous by the second Then all of a sudden I begin to think to myself I do not feel mad or nervous I feel better I feel happy · Do you think the narrative provides enough descriptive language to create a compelling found poem? I found that I did put enough description in my narrative project but I defiantly need to add more because creating the poem was a difficult task. · Do you think the descriptive language more so creates a setting or delivers the subtext of a theme? The description I used in my narrative project was used more for the setting and not the theme · In revision, will you focus on using description to develop more of the setting or more of a theme? I will focus on adding more description to both the setting and theme because both have room to work on
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Sabatino
10/19/2018 10:55:57 am
Glad to see you compose a new genre as part of your revision process. I wonder how the reflective response here could be further developed?
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coleman clark
10/22/2018 02:20:02 pm
I like the way that you were able to describe the principal. And also the way that you walked the reader through your feelings at the time. good job
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Soumiya
10/22/2018 05:00:54 pm
I can actually relate because I remember getting in trouble and getting my butt whooped. I feel you on this man 🤦🏽♀️
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