In week nine I was instructed to respond to questions in a vlog format about my second draft for my narrative project. I the second draft we I had to take my original story and write about an alternative outcome. This style was similar to a style called fanfiction. More information about fanfiction can be found here What is Fan Fiction -- and why is it making people nervous? (Stephen Downes). The rewriting process was a little more difficult because the first draft was in first person point of view. After listening to Rewinding and Rewriting: The Alternate Universes in Our Head (Hidden Brain Podcast) this helped me write my third person point of view second draft. This vlog is my second ever vlog but I believe it was better than my first. Thank you for any comments that you leave. Every comment helps. The vlog will be down below.
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This is the blog post for week seven and this week I found a founded poem within my first draft of my narrative project. This poem is some inside of my feelings of my convocation with my mother when I had to tell her about what happened that school that day. I used a free form excerpting and remixing style most in my poem because it helped me to add and take away small details that I did not need to make my poem the way it is. I also found it the easiest to use. Thank you for reading.
The Feelings With In She looks with a death stare I began reading her anger I thought about the trouble I was in Why would I throw a snowball at the principle Her anger is like chaos now I do not even know what to say This fight is now serious My mind starts to go into a cold and slushy feeling You do not get into trouble I told myself I start to be more and more nervous by the second Then all of a sudden I begin to think to myself I do not feel mad or nervous I feel better I feel happy · Do you think the narrative provides enough descriptive language to create a compelling found poem? I found that I did put enough description in my narrative project but I defiantly need to add more because creating the poem was a difficult task. · Do you think the descriptive language more so creates a setting or delivers the subtext of a theme? The description I used in my narrative project was used more for the setting and not the theme · In revision, will you focus on using description to develop more of the setting or more of a theme? I will focus on adding more description to both the setting and theme because both have room to work on |
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