In week nine I was instructed to respond to questions in a vlog format about my second draft for my narrative project. I the second draft we I had to take my original story and write about an alternative outcome. This style was similar to a style called fanfiction. More information about fanfiction can be found here What is Fan Fiction -- and why is it making people nervous? (Stephen Downes). The rewriting process was a little more difficult because the first draft was in first person point of view. After listening to Rewinding and Rewriting: The Alternate Universes in Our Head (Hidden Brain Podcast) this helped me write my third person point of view second draft. This vlog is my second ever vlog but I believe it was better than my first. Thank you for any comments that you leave. Every comment helps. The vlog will be down below.
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Sabatino
10/30/2018 06:34:55 pm
Thank you for sharing this reflection. I appreciate how you discuss the specific revisions you made in the second draft. Please remember to link this post on your narrative project web page.
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Ryan
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